Feedback from Rough Cut

Camerawork
One of the common comments from the feedback of the rough cut was that more variety of shots were needed in the section for comments on the camerawork.

Editing
One of the comments on our editing was that the 'lip syncing needs to be sorted' this is something we are currently working on and the lip syncing will be in line by the time our final music video is finished. A more positive comment on the editing was that the shot where Emile pops out from between the couple is good and takes the audience by surprise.

Effects
People have criticized there is a lack of effects used but we will use more effects before we finish the the music video.

Mise-en-scene
On one of the shots the sun is glaring in the background, one of the comments from our feedback says that this is good and effective. There were other positive comments on the mise-en-scene, such as the editing and the lighting throughout the music video which is effective in the video as it makes it more realistic.

Performance/Genre
In the feedback it said that the performance was good in most points as the people acting in the video did not show embarrassment, this is clearly a good thing as the better the performance of the actors, the more realistic the music video will seem. One of the comments said that when Emile is singing the song, it looks realistic as if he is actually singing in real life. A less positive point from the feedback, points out that there were times during the video where we did not keep a straight face. this is important as the video needs to be serious as it will make it realistic, to solve this, we will not use the footage where some of the acting is less believable.

Continuity
In our rough cut, it is not clear exactly how the final project will pull together as it is still largely unedited for most of the video, despite this, the people who commented on or rough cut sated that the continuity is good and it is clear where the video is heading in terms of a transformation between a unedited rough cut and a decent final music video.

Overall Comments
Generally, people like the idea of the video and think that it will be good at the end of the project, despite this, people feel that more editing is required if the music video is to fulfill its potential.