feedback from our peers

from the feedback that we received there are a few areas of our planning that need revisiting and improving. For example, we need to include a new step by step shot list as this will portray our intentions for our music video a lot clearer. Another point that has been made clear is that we need to expand upon our location ideas, at the moment it is very vague and lacks sufficient analysis and detail. At the moment others in the class have rated our planning efforts at an average of about a level three. To up our grade and maximize our grades we are going to have to do additional work on our blog to achieve higher levels of planing marks.