response to our feedback

First of all we shall address the problem with our location planning.

For our video we are going to shoot the majority of the video in the pond area of the college, in this area there are picnic benches that we will be using and the whole area looks like a village park, which is fitting for a meeting place between the two characters in the music video.

Another issue raised in our feedback is the lack of mention of props that we will be using in our video, this is for the simple reason that we are not going to be using any specific props whilst filming. What we will be using, as previously mentioned, will be the benches that are already there and that is basically it.

Finally, our shot list.we are aiming to keep our video simple, as we have been given the advice that sometimes less is more, and from watching some simple videos we think that it achieves a good affect after all editing has taken place.

1st: the two are sitting on separate benches. using the fish eye lens, it will emphasize the distance between the two people. (whilst the music is playing without any lyrics)

2nd: various shots of the boy, in different positions on his bench, and her hardly moving at all. Again these shots will be using the fish eye lens. (also when there are no lyrics, just music)

3rd: when the lyrics comes in shot will vary from him being beside her, and then sitting on the other separate bench, again with him in different positions on the bench, "jumping" from one place to the other.

4th: shot from down the side of the bench with the boy in the foreground and her in the background with him singing.

5th: in the chorus, panning shots of the boy lying on top of the bench with camera circling him. this would be without the fish eye lens.

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